Hazlitts most cogent rhetorical strategy used to prove his point is syntax. It is evident in several parts of the passage but especially in his lengthy sentence that stretches from lines 2 to 47. Hazlitts purpose in including this sentence is clear: to make the reader feel as if the sentence is an interminable nightmare. He collects a massive series of calamities that will convince pretty much everybody that money will lead to happiness. Hazlitt uses this syntactical strategy to make the reader anxious, discouraged and hopeless. It is more than evident that Hazlitt believes that someone without money will feel this way. In order to make the sentence more effective he uses anaphora and asyndeton. Through the sentence he starts many of his phrases with the word or and eliminates conjunctions as to create an elongating effect the sentence that is certain to deter the reader.
The use of diction also contributes to the rhetorical effect in the passage. Hazlitt uses words that are sure to affect the reader in a negative way. Once the reader contemplates emphasized words such as contempt, disparaged, neglected, exile and disappointment, he has no other way than to believe that the lack of money will cause him to feel this way. Hazlitt uses denotative diction and clear words to send the message that Unless you have money you will be miserable. Diction in this passage builds so that there is hopelessness in the air but Hazlitt is never aggressive or insulting, he merely exposes what he believes is true without personally directing his words to the reader.
Hazlitt also uses appeals to pathos, logos and ethos as a method to assist in his argument that money is an essential part of a happy mans life. He makes the reader believe that he is and honorable and well educated man since the beginning. His appeal to ethos is evident in the first three words of the passage, he says Literally and truly. Using this as the introduction to his essay Hazlitt creates the illusion that he is an honest man and the reader gets the feeling that he is well educated. He also appeals to pathos because by using words with strong negative words through the entire piece he appeal to emotions and makes the reader feel in need of money.
Hazlitts essay is well constructed and rhetorically strong in making the point that money will lead to a happier life. Hazlitts use of diction, syntax and rhetorical appeals are extremely solid and provide enough evidence to change ones opinion about money.